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Inspiration for this comic' comes from HotDiggedyDemon's "Watch out, Ashleigh" : [link]

One of my main reasons why I got so hooked up on MLP: Friendship is Magic is thanks to one of the most famous flash cartoonists, HotDiggedyDemon, for his parody series, PONY.MOV, and his Tumblr account, Ask Jappleack. His stuff is very funny, but be warned, his cartoons are NOT for young kids to see.

Anyway, I think most fans, like myself, are wondering why didn't Derpy make a cameo appearance as the mailpony in the season 3 episode, "Wonderbolts Academy." It would have fit perfectly; though I wonder where the connection between Derpy and mailpony has started.

I'm guessing the rumors about Derpy no longer making any more appearances are starting to become true. I can't understand why the creators would come up with that decision since thousands, maybe even millions, of fans like Derpy. To me, I don't see Derpy as a being offensive to me. I mean, there's been A LOT of cartoon characters who are portrayed as idiots. Examples include: Patrick Star, Stimpy, G.I.R, Fred Fredburger, Meatwad, & Caboose (Red vs. Blue). So what makes Derpy so different from the rest? Because she has crossed-eyes? Well... whatever the case may be, Derpy will still live among the hearts of MLP fans everywhere.

Artist's Note:
Sigh... okay, so several commenters were pointing this out to me on how Derpy's eyes are not so... well... derpy. So I'm writing this as an Artist's Note so that everyone can learn why her eyes are not as cross-eyed as they would like to believe. Here it goes:

Drawing the derpy eyes is tricky when she squints like that. I've studied several vectors and other reference to get a general idea on how her eyes would look when she squints like that. Originally she wasn't going to have derpy eyes because of that squinted expression, but I've decided to try to adjusted them a bit before submitting this comic. Has anyone else noticed the difference in the light reflecting off of each eye? They're not properly aligned. That is all I could do at this point. Also, I was trying to capture the same expression as Jappleack in the video listed above.

For more on my MLP Comics, click this [link] .

*MLP: Friendship is Magic is copyrighted to Hasbro & Lauren Faust
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:iconjunkwriter:
This comic is hilarious, and makes plenty of sense. She is obviously angry at the mailpony she thinks is attempting to steal her job. The colors and drawings are great, and the colors are pleasing to the eye. I like the way the background looks like the actual set of MLP: FiM and the way you did the sound effects was clever, and does not prevent the viewer from seeing any of the main subject in the picture. Great use of emotions, and the way the Stallion mailpony's eyes dilate when he sees Derpy with the baseball bat shows how truly afraid he really is.
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:iconcloudandis:
I love how you've done the comic, the line art smooth and the colors fluid. Although some proportions are slightly off, you did amazing with the stallion's idle pose to moving pose. Other than that... there is one thing I must say.

DERPY'S EYES.
Crossed :D
Okay, now that we have that out of the way... another thing I noticed was the out line on the bat. It seemed to pop out a bit too much as compared to the other much softer outlines and colors, yet in the lower panel you used a lighter color which still didn't seem to flow properly with the panel. It's just a matter of color picking, so not a big deal. Otherwise, most of your outlines popped in the right places and added very well to the picture.

As for the shading on the panel with Derpy tapping the bat in the first scene, you may want to darken it a lot more. Almost as if it were to give a feeling of foreboding- because to have the same light and painterly colors simply reduces the amount of threat that there is.

Derpy's lower body also appears to be rather high... I know that she is a pony, but she proportionally should have a longer torso.

Other than that, it came out perfectly. Well done.
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:iconneondjproductions:
NeonDjProductions Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
I can already hear Jappleack with her bat saying


"And that's mah job"
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:iconthebluee53:
thebluee53 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well it seams that Derpy is going to  beat the tar, stuffing and into next week out of that colt.
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:iconwereepiclikethat:
WereEpicLikeThat Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2014  Student Artist
hey Hasbro hint hint/
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:iconwolf-odonnell:
Wolf-ODonnell Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014
Looks like the mail pony is slapping Derpy on the butt... which fits in well with Crowne Prince's video of that exact same scene.
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:iconvintageeasack:
Vintageeasack Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014   General Artist
Don't cross her.
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:iconroyal-phoenix:
royal-phoenix Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
you bet it is. you tell 'em DERPY!! WOOP-WOOOOOOOOOOOOP!!!!!!!
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:iconfredan92:
FreDaN92 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014
Derpy: wrong time wrong place mother******
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:iconelythespidermare:
Elythespidermare Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
there's only  one thing to do when her eyes are normal at you run  
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:icongamer4cod:
gamer4COD Featured By Owner 2 days ago  New member Hobbyist Writer
Or fly, as long as its as fast as you can.
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:iconelythespidermare:
Elythespidermare Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
But that's only if you have wings
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:icongamer4cod:
gamer4COD Featured By Owner 1 day ago  New member Hobbyist Writer
If only, If only, the mocking bird sighed.
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:iconelythespidermare:
Elythespidermare Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Troll
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:icongamer4cod:
gamer4COD Featured By Owner 22 hours ago  New member Hobbyist Writer
No, holes.
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:iconrexlare:
Rexlare Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
When her eyes are straight you know you're dead.
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:iconsanselam:
Sanselam Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
xD oooh derpy!(facepalm)
GREAT COMIC :D
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:iconfierce-dities-link:
Fierce-Dities-Link Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013
There are three things you never mess with:
1. Is Derpy's daughter, Dinky.
2. Derpy's muffins.
3. Derpy's job.

You have been warned!
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:iconrarityponydesigner:
rarityponydesigner Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015
You missed one.
4. Derpy's crush on Doctor Whooves .
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:iconfierce-dities-link:
Fierce-Dities-Link Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2015
Ah! Very true!
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:iconrarityponydesigner:
rarityponydesigner Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2015
Nopony messes with Derpy's crush, the Doctor!!
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:iconfierce-dities-link:
Fierce-Dities-Link Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2015
No kidding, they were ment to be! I like to think Derpy is the Mother of Dinky, the Doctor is the Father, and Dinky is a Time Lord Pony! XD
While this may not be true, i like to see it that way! XD
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:iconcaptainprower:
CaptainPrower Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
DEY TOOK UR JAWB!
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:icongamer4cod:
gamer4COD Featured By Owner Edited 2 days ago  New member Hobbyist Writer
TOOK MAH JAWB
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:iconpacmanpower89:
PacmanPower89 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
DON'T MESS WITH THE DERPY BECAUSE THATS HER JOB! that should have been part of the story
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:iconflutter-shed:
Flutter-SHED Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
HEY HEY HEY derpy your one crazy b!tch
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:iconsiggie740:
siggie740 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
DON'T MESS WITH DERPY!
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:iconkiranta:
Kiranta Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013
Guess Derpy forgot she has the day off on this episode.
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:iconfire5236:
Fire5236 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Derpy's eyes aren't crossed. Unbelievable!
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:iconthesnakerox:
Thesnakerox Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Her eyes straighten:
•When she gets mad
•Prior to death
•When she is a vastly more intelligent version of herself
•When Hasbro does laser surgery to fix them
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:iconfire5236:
Fire5236 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol :D
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:iconthesnakerox:
Thesnakerox Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The fourth one actually did happen, sadly.
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:iconfire5236:
Fire5236 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yep, I've heard that Hasbro was going to fix her :(
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:iconarticfoxice:
articfoxice Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Student Artist
derpy is... traveling.
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:iconzeraio:
Zeraio Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013
Knee capping time!!!
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:iconhellsender:
Hellsender Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013
HOLY CRAP, SHE HAS EYEBROWS!!!
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:iconw0nderbolts:
W0nderbolts Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013
no its not your job *steals bat from her* dont even think about it
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:iconsephirath21000:
Sephirath21000 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconkyleplz:"HE TOOK YER JIB!!"
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:iconopticblackout:
OpTicBlackouT Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013
COCKA DOODLE DO
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:iconjetbourdkid:
Jetbourdkid Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013
Nice to know I'm not the only one who wished the mailpony was Derpy
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:iconhackerdashfim:
HackerDashFiM Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
HE TOOK HER JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconesitaro3670:
Esitaro3670 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
never, NEVER, do the work of Derpy
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:iconrynation:
Rynation Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013
stuffs him in gay bathhouse*
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:icon1127779:
1127779 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Go derpy!
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:iconniclove:
NicLove Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love Derpy 2 ! Look at my thing! [link]
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:iconp3g4s1st3r:
p3g4s1st3r Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013
50 bits say Derpy wins!
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:iconwait0wat:
Wait0wat Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013
I'LL GRAB HIS LEGS!!!
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:iconspooky2341:
Spooky2341 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013
I see what you did there :P
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:icondarkabusis:
DarkAbusis Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Student General Artist
Actually Derpy was in some of the episode except she is way more hidden than usual. I had to go through episodes 2-3 times before I finally caught her. The episodes that I couldn't find her I saw like 5-6 times. That's a lot of Season 3 MLP.
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:icondbzfan12:
DBZFan12 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
She's in every episode at least once; she now makes a cameo in the title sequence.
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:icondarkabusis:
DarkAbusis Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Student General Artist
Actually she is in the episode sometimes. They hid her even more than usual.
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:icondbzfan12:
DBZFan12 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconfluttershyyayplz:
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